Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: In Edmonton, the long weekend in August is called “Heritage Days”.
Sentence 2: It is supposedly the largest multi-cultural festival in the world; Last year, there were over sixty cultures represented
Sentence 3: There is always music, dancing, arts, and crafts, but the food is often the best experience.
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In Edmonton,the long weekend in August is called "Heritage days,Supposedly the largest multi-cultural festival in the world;Last year over sixty cultures were represented and there is always music,dancing,arts and crafts,but the food is often the best experience
The long weekend in August is called "Heritage Days" in Edmonton which is supposedly the largest multi-cultural festival in the world and last year had over sixty cultures represented; always including music, dancing, arts, and crafts with food often being the best experience.
Sariyat: Good, but note that you shouldn't use capital letters after a semicolon or comma (unless the word is a proper noun), and that you do need a period at the end of the sentence;-)
Daniela:Nicely done!
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