Tuesday, July 8, 2008

ALL CHANGE, July 8th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

My wonderful parents lovingly raised their son’s children.

1. change the subject noun 2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Rupinder
My wonderful aunt lovingly raised their son's children.

Veronica Baig said...

Rupinder: You're on the right track here, but there is an agreement problem with aunt/their;-)

Anonymous said...

My wonderful family lovingly raised their son’s children.

Veronica Baig said...

Jordan: So you have redone #1 in an appropriate way. Good.
NEXT STUDENT: Please make change #2.

Unknown said...

My wonderful parents lovingly raised their son's pet.

Veronica Baig said...

Sariyat: Thank you--nice change:-)

Anonymous said...

Rupinder,
My wonderful family lovingly raised their daughter's pet.

Veronica Baig said...

Rupinder: Good.