Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.
My wonderful parents lovingly raised their son’s children.
1. change the subject noun 2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense
Tuesday, July 8, 2008
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Rupinder
My wonderful aunt lovingly raised their son's children.
Rupinder: You're on the right track here, but there is an agreement problem with aunt/their;-)
My wonderful family lovingly raised their son’s children.
Jordan: So you have redone #1 in an appropriate way. Good.
NEXT STUDENT: Please make change #2.
My wonderful parents lovingly raised their son's pet.
Sariyat: Thank you--nice change:-)
Rupinder,
My wonderful family lovingly raised their daughter's pet.
Rupinder: Good.
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