Wednesday, November 21, 2007

GRAMMAR QUESTION, Nov. 21st

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

When I arrived in Paris neither the bus or the trains was running, the following day the buses were running and trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.

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22 comments:

The BlueScreener said...

When I arrived in Paris neither the buses nor the trains were running; the following day the buses were running and the trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived at Paris neither the bus or the train was running, the following day the bus was running and train started to move later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris neither the bus or the train was running, the following day the bus were running and the train started to move later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris neither the buses nor the trains were running; the following day the buses were running and the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains were running; the following day, the buses were running, and the trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Pat et Marie said...

When I arrived in Paris neither the bus nor the trains was running; the following day the buses were running and trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

James and Sara: Pretty good; now remember the punctuation;-)
Shahinaz: You've made a start on this, now think about subject-verb agreement and the meaning of the sentence.
Andra: A good solution:-)
Pat et Marie: (who is actually responding?)you're on the right track; now think about the sense of the sentence and punctuation.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris neither the buses nor the trains was running. The following day, the buses were running but the trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains were running; the following day, the buses were running and the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Nadia: On the right track (check subject-verb agreement and punctuation).
Sara: There's still a little punctuation problem;-)

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains, were running; the following day, the buses were running and the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains were running. The following day, the buses were running but the trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: Sorry; that's not it!
Nadia: You're getting closer;-)

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains, were running; the following day the buses were running and the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains were running. The following day, the buses were running but the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara and Nadia: You're both close--think punctuation;-)

KellyM said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither buses nor trains were running; the following day, buses ran and trains started to move later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Kelly: Very good:-)

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains were running. The following day, the buses were running, but the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Nadia: Good!

Anonymous said...

When I arrived in Paris, neither the buses nor the trains, were running. The following day, the buses were running and the trains started moving later in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: You'll have to wait for the answer;-)