Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 6 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 6. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.
My children watched the Santa Clause parade at the mall.
1. change the subject noun 2. change direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the first verb name
5. change the adjective 6. change the verb tense
Wednesday, November 21, 2007
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1. change the subject noun
My kids watched the Santa Clause parade at the mall.
2.change the direct object
My kids watched the clown parade at the mall.
Shahinaz, I don't think it is a good answer. Here is mine:
2. change direct object noun
My children watched the Santa Clause sleigh at the mall.
3.change the indirect object noun
My kids watched the clown parade at the school.
Sara: Good
Shahinaz: That's a good idea, but in this sentence, "Santa Claus" describes the parade, so it is an adjective.
Pat et Marie: Good, but keep the change to "kids".
Andra: Good.
NEXT STUDENT: Please continue from
"My kids watched the Santa Claus sleigh at the school". The next change should be #4.
#4: Change the first verb name.
My kids attended the Santa Claus sleigh at the school.
Nadia: OK--that's an interesting use of the verb.
Sorry, I made a mistake. I had 'parade' on my mind when changing the verb The sentence should read:
#4: Change the first verb name.
My kids rode the Santa Claus sleigh at the school.
5. change the adjective
My kids rode the festively decorated sleigh at the school.
Nadia: That's much better:-)
Miljana: Excellent change!
6. Change the verb tense:
My kids are riding the festively decorated sleigh at the school.
1. change the subject noun
My friends watched the Santa Clause parade at the mall.
Nadia: Good.
Sara: You needed to keep the verb tense change that Nadia made;-)
Sorry Veronica. I wasn't thinking clearly.
1. change the subject noun.
My friends are riding the festively decorated sleigh at the school.
Change the direct object noun:
My friends are riding the festively decorated horse at the school.
Sara: That's better;-)
Kelly: Good change.
Change the indirect object noun:
My friends are riding the festively decorated horse at the park.
4. change the first verb name
My friends are leading the festively decorated horse at the park.
Kelly and Miljana: Good changes:-)
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