Tuesday, November 13, 2007

ALL CHANGE! Nov. 13th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. Student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 6 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 6. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

Susan is still eating candy from last Halloween.

1. change the subject noun 2. change direct indirect object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the verb name
5. change the adjective 6. change the verb tense

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

1. change subject noun
My brother is still eating candy from last Halloween.

Anonymous said...

My mistake. Disregard the first post.
1. change the subject noun + pronoun
Matt, he is still eating candy from last Halloween.

Anonymous said...

2. Change the direct object noun

Matt, he is still eating pumpkin pie from last Halloween.

Unknown said...

3. change the indirect object noun
Matt, he is still eating pumpkin pie from last Thanksgiving.

Anonymous said...

Sara: The first one is better than the second one!
Nadia and Seiko: Yes, but you have followed Sara's mistake.
Next student: Please omit "he".

Anonymous said...

CHANGE VERB NAME:

Matt is still consuming pumpkin pie from last Thanksgiving.

Anonymous said...

5. change the adjective
Matt is still consuming pumpkin pie from previous Thanksgiving.

Veronica Baig said...

Kelly: Good.
Andra: Yes, but you need to add "the" before "previous".

Anonymous said...

6. change verb tense
Matt had been consuming pumpkin pie from the previous Thanksgiving.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: Good.

KellyM said...

CHANGE SUBJECT NOUN

Julie had been consuming pumpkin pie from the previous Thanksgiving.

Veronica Baig said...

Kelly: Good start to round 2!

Anonymous said...

Change the direct object noun.

Julie had been consuming turkey from the previous Thanksgiving.

Veronica Baig said...

Bernie: Good.

Anonymous said...

Julie has been consuming turkey from the prior thanksgiving

Anonymous said...

Julie has been consuming turkey from the prior thanksgiving

Veronica Baig said...

Shahinaz: Good work!