Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The art work was stunned: not only were the colours bright but each of the many paintings were creative, individualistic and showed originality.
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The art work was stunning; not only were the colors bright but each of the many paintings were creative, individualistic and original.
The artwork was stunning; each unique painting used bright colours, was creative, and showed originality.
The art work is stunning: each of the many paintings is creative, individualistic, and original using bright colours.
Sara: A good solution:-)
Nadia: Yes, but a little too much change.
Seiko: I don't know why you changed the verb tense, and moving "bright colours" is a little awkward.
The art work was stunning; not only were the colours bright, but each of the many paintings were creative, individual and original.
Correcting a mistake in my previous post:
The art work was stunning; not only were the colours bright, but each of the many paintings was creative, individual and original.
The art work was stunning: not only were the colours bright, but each of the many paintings was creative, individualistic and showed originality.
Kelly: That's a nice way of doing it:-)
Andra: Good.
The art work was stunning; not only were the colors bright, but each of the many paintings were creative, individualistic and original.
James: Good apart from an agreement error;-)
The art work was stunning; not only were the colors bright, but each of the many paintings was creative, individualistic, and showed creativity.
Bernie: Good work!
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