Sentence 1: I wanted to take another course once I have finished this one.
Sentence 2: I registered for a more challenging, higher level writing course
#1: Use a gerund to combine the sentences
#2: Use a relative pronoun to combine the sentences
This blog is for students registered in Engl 177 at Athabasca University
On Nytol Sleep Aid -- "Warning: May cause drowsiness."
2 comments:
#1. Taking a more challenging, higher level writing course is what I want, therefore, I registered for it as soon as I finished this one.
#2. I registered for another course that is more challenging and higher level writing, when i finished this one.
#1--yes; #2--yes, but no comma.
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