Correct the errors in the following sentence:
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Any visitor to Vietnam must remember to take their anti-malaria medicine regularly; for the most effective prevention so they don't get sick and spoil the trip.
Visitors to Vietnam must remember to take their anti-malaria medicine; it must be taken regularly to be effective in preventing illness that would spoil their trip.
All visitors to Vietnam must remember to take their anti-malaria medicine regularly to effectively prevent them from getting sick and spoiling the trip.
MARTHA:On the right track--now think about agreement and punctuation;-)
SHELLEY: A good solution:-)
WOOKJIN: Another good solution:-)
When visiting Vietnam, one must remember to regularly take their anti-medicine in order to prevent sickness which will spoil the trip.
A visitor who comes from Vietnam must remember to take regularly his anti-malaria medicine, to prevent himself from sickness, and that it wouldn't spoil his trip.
Best regards.
SAADAT: Close--now think about agreement issues;-)
JOHANNE: You need to think about this carefully--where is "someone" visiting? Then I think the sentence will make more sense to you;-)
A visitor in Vietnam must remember to take their anti-malaria medicine regularly to prevent them from being affected by the sickness, as that would spoil the trip.
VIRGINIA:Almost there--think about agreement;-)
When visiting Vietnam, one must remember to regularly take her/his anti-malaria medicine in order to prevent sickness which will spoil the trip.
SAADAT:You've understood the problem, but you can't mix up "one" and "his/her";-)
A visitor to Vietnam must remember to take thier anti-malaria medicine regularly to be effective in preventing them from sickness, as it would spoil the trip.
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