Wednesday, June 9, 2010

GRAMMAR QUESTION, June 9th, 2010

Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Everyone of the runners who are in the race are here but we can't get started with the first ones until you line up on a starting line.

12 comments:

marthasq said...

All the runners who are in the race are here, but we can't get started with the first race until you line up at the starting line.

Unknown said...

All the runners who are in the race are here, but we can't start the first race until they line up at the starting line.

Veronica Baig said...

MARTHA:Close--think extra punctuation;-)
ALEXANDRA:On the right track--who does "they" refer to? And think about punctuation;-)

jhamelin said...

Each runners who are in the race is here, but we can't get started this first one until they will all line up on the starting line.

Veronica Baig said...

JOHANNE:A good effort--think about singular/plural and verb tense; also note that there is a missing word and some missing punctuation;-)

Saadat said...

All runners who are in the race are here; however, we cannot get started until they line up on the starting line.

Veronica Baig said...

SAADAT: Very close--there's just a bit of extra punctuation needed;-)

Josephine said...

All the runners who are in the race are here; however, until the runners line up on the starting line, we cannot get started.

Veronica Baig said...

JOSEPHINE: That's very close--think about some extra punctuation that is needed;-)

Josephine said...

Am I supposed to use non-essential clause?

All the runners,who are in the race, are here; however, until the runners line up on the start line, we cannot get started.

Or, can I just write

All the runners in the race are here; however, until the runners line up on the start line, we cannot get started.

Veronica Baig said...

JOSEPHINE: A good suggestion, but that's not the problem--see the "answers" in the new edition of the blog later today;-)

Shelley said...

All the runners are here; however, we can not begin the races until you line up on the starting line.