Yasmin excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense
Sunday, March 8, 2009
ALL CHANGE! Mar. 8, 2010
Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.
Yasmin excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense
Yasmin excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense
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7 comments:
Yasmin excitedly will ride her new bicycle to school.
2. Yasmin excitedly rode her new blue bicycle to school
#1 Robert excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
1. Sheila excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
2. Yasmin excitedly rode her new car to school.
3. Yasmin excitedly rode her new bicycle to a restaurant.
4. Yasmin excitedly rode her old bicycle to school.
5. Yasmin sadly rode her new bicycle to school.
6. Yasmin excitedly took her new bicycle to school.
7. Yasmin excitedly has ridden her new bicycle to school.
STEPHANIE:You changed the verb tense instead of the subject noun;-)
MARTHA: You have added an adjective instead of changing the object noun.
UZMA: Yes, that's change #1--thanks!
SAADAT: #1--yes; #2--doesn't make sense; #s 3-7--good. Note, you should keep each change you make and build on it--don't go back to the original each time;-)
NEXT STUDENT: PLEASE BUILD ON UZMA'S SENTENCE ABOVE AND MAKE CHANGE #2.
#2 Robert excitedly rode his new motorcycle to school.
#3 Robert excitedly rode his new motorcycle to school.
#4 Robert excitedly rode his new motorcycle to the park.
#5 Robert gladly rode his new motorcycle to the park.
#6 Robert gladly carried his new motorcycle to the park.
#7 Robert will gladly carry his new motorcycle to the park.
UZMA: Thanks for making the change from "her" to "his". In #3--you haven't made any change; #4--you make change #3; #s 5, 6, and 7, you have made the correct changes, but note that you missed change #4.
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