Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The Christmas and New Year holiday make a wonderful break for many people.
Sentence 2: For those people working in sales, the Christmas season and New Year can be the busiest time of the year.
Sentence 3: People who have had a really busy holiday season may well feel that they need a real holiday when it is all over and done with.
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The Christmas and New Year holiday is the busiest time of the year for people working in sales ,these people may feel that they need a real holiday when it is all over and done.
While the Christmas and New Year holiday make a wonderful break for many people, it can be the busiest tie of the year for those who work in sales: in fact, people who have had a really busy holiday season may well feel that they need a real holiday when it is all over and done with.
UZMA: Pretty good, but you have left out some information here, and you are again having a problem with the punctuation between independent clauses;-)
JOSEPHINE: Excellent apart from a small typo;-)
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