Thursday, May 8, 2008

ALL CHANGE! May 8th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

A small deer lazily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees.

1. change the subject noun 2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjectives
5. change the adverb name 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense

10 comments:

matt said...

A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees

roxannefr2 said...

A small deer lazily nibbled the lush plants around the tall trees.

Anonymous said...

Rupinder,
A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush plants around the tall fence.

kerry said...

A small rabbit lazily nibbled the green plants around the rustic fence.

kelly0584 said...

A small rabbit quietly nibbled the green plants around the rustic fence.

Veronica Baig said...

Matt: Good.
Roxanne: Yes, but also keep the change that the previous student made;-)
Rupinder: Good.
Kerry: Yes, but there was more than one adjective;-)
Kelly: Good

Daniela said...

A small rabbit quietly grazed the green plants around the rustic fence.

Veronica Baig said...

Daniella: A good substitution:-)

Carole said...

A small rabbit quietly ate the green plants around the rustic fence.

Veronica Baig said...

Carole: An excellent substitution:-)