Correct the errors in the following sentence:
If you shouldn't mind me to ask where you are going when me and my sisters seen you last week.
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Would you mind if I asked you, where were you going when my sisters and I saw you last week?
Would you mind if I asked you, "Where were you going when my sisters and I saw you last week?"
Rupinder,
Would you mind if I asked you,"where were you going last week when my sisters and I saw you?"
I hope you won't mind if I ask you where you were going last week when me and my sisters saw you.
Dina: An interesting solution--check the verb form and punctuation;-)
Sara and Rupinder: Yes, but think carefully about the punctuation.
Carole: Some good changes, but check pronoun usage and punctuation .
Another try:
I hope you won't mind if I ask you where you were going last week, when my sisters and I saw you.
Carole: That's a lot better.
Would you mind if I ask you, where were you going when my sisters and I saw you last week.
Dina: There's some improvement there, but you're not quite all the way there;-)
If you dont mind me asking, When my sisters and i saw you last week, where were you going?
Kayleigh: You've made some improvement--watch punctuation and capitilization.
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