Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The car was driving erratic when it'd went off the road and the driver Jack Lemay is injured serious.
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Jack Lemay was seriously injured when he erratically drove his car off the road.
The car was driving erratic when it went off the road; the driver Jack Lemay was seriously injured.
Another attempt:
The car was erratic when it went off the road and the driver, Jack Lemay, was seriously injured.
Sara: #1--That's an interesting solution; #2--not as good.
Kerry: On the right track--thinkabout word form;-)
Jack Lemay was seriously injured after driving erracticly and forcing the car went off the road.
The car was being driven erratically, when it went off the road, and the driver Jack Lemay was seriously injured.
Jeff: You're on the right track, but you need to proofread your sentence;-)
Dina: Yes, but do check the punctuation.
The car was being driven erratically, when it went off the road; and the driver Jack Lemay was seriously injured.
After driving the car erratically, Jack Lemay, the driver, was seriously injured; and the car went off the road.
Dina: That was a movein the wrong direction:-(
Carole: Good apart from the semicolon usage;-)
The car was being driven erratically when it went off the road, and the driver Jack Lemay was seriously injured.
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