Monday, April 14, 2008

ALL CHANGE! April 14th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

The avid gardener waited for Easter before excitedly planting her flower beds.

1. change the subject noun 2. change the first indirect object noun
3. change the second indirect object noun 4. change the adjectives (two)
5. change the adverb name 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense

9 comments:

saraw said...

The avid woman waited for Easter before excitedly planting her flower beds.

Anonymous said...

Rupinder,
2. The avid woman waited for Easter before excitedly planting her vegetable garden.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: Good.
Rupinder: You have changed the second indirect object noun and also the adjective that goes with it;-)
NEXT STUDENT: Please change the first indirect object noun.

Jeff said...

The avid woman waited for Christmas before excitedly planting her vegetable garden.

Dina said...

The avid woman waited for Christmas before impatiently planting her vegetable garden.

Veronica Baig said...

Jeff: Yes (I hope she lived somewhere other than Canada!)
Dina: You've changed the adverb rather than the adjective--do you want to try again?

Dina said...

The avid woman waited for Christmas before excitedly planting her tantalizing vegetable garden.

Dina said...

The avid woman waited for Christmas before excitedly planting her tantalizing herbal garden.

Anonymous said...

Rupinder,

The greedy woman waited for Christmas before excitedly planting her tantalizing herbal garden.