Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The holiday season can be one of high expectations and increased stress.
Sentence 2: People want the season to be perfect, peaceful, and happy.
Sentence 3: The reality often is that the gifts are inappropriate, everything costs too much money, everyone eats and drinks too much, and some of the relatives can be difficult.
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Because people want the holiday season to be perfect, peaceful, and happy, it can be a time of high expectations and increased stress; the reality often is that the gifts are inappropriate, everything costs too much money, everyone eats and drinks too much, and some relatives can be difficult.
Nadia: That's put it very well!
While people want the holiday season to be perfect, peaceful, and happy, this time of year can be full of high expectations and increased stress; the reality is often that the gifts are inappropriate, everything costs too much money, everyone eats and drinks too much, and some relatives can be difficult.
Sara: Good work!
The holiday season can be one of high expectations and increased stress, as people want the season to be perfect,peaceful,and happy; however,the reality often is that gifts are inapropriate, everything cost too much money, everyone eats and drinks too much,and some of the relatives can be difficult.
Bernie: Good work:-)
People want the holiday season to be perfect, peaceful, and happy, but it can be one of high expectations and increased stress; the reality often is that the gifts are inappropriate, everything costs too much money, everyone eats and drinks too much, and some of the relatives can be difficult.
Andra: Good work.
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