Saturday, December 1, 2007

GRAMMAR QUESTION, Dec. 1st

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The team is real happy that they won the game and now the players recover from the party they had thrown afterwards.

Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.

Note: you can still see previous Grammar Questions of the Week; they are posted in the archive in the side bar.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy they won the game and now the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate.

Anonymous said...

The team are really happy that they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: On the right track; be careful not to change meaning;-)
Andra: Almost there.

kerry said...

The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate afterwards.

Veronica Baig said...

Kerry and Sara: Check agreement issues;-)

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy that they won the game, but now the players are recovering from the party they threw afterwards.

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had
arranged afterwards.

Veronica Baig said...

Nadia and Shahinaz: You're almost there, too, but you need to think about agreement;-)

Anonymous said...

The team members are really happy that they won the game, and now they are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.

or

The team is really happy with its victory, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.

or

The team is really happy that it won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.

Veronica Baig said...

Milijana: You have solved part of the problem with those answers--well done; now can you check the verb tenses?

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy with its victory; the players are now recovering from the after-party.:)

Veronica Baig said...

Milijana: You found the problem, but "after-party" isn't right--it's not an English expression;-)

Anonymous said...

One more try:

The team is really happy with its victory; the players are now recovering from the party they threw afterward. :-)

Veronica Baig said...

Milijana: An excellent solution.

Anonymous said...

The team is really happy they won the game, and now all the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate afterwards.