Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The team is real happy that they won the game and now the players recover from the party they had thrown afterwards.
Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.
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Saturday, December 1, 2007
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The team is really happy they won the game and now the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate.
The team are really happy that they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.
Sara: On the right track; be careful not to change meaning;-)
Andra: Almost there.
The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.
The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate afterwards.
Kerry and Sara: Check agreement issues;-)
The team is really happy that they won the game, but now the players are recovering from the party they threw afterwards.
The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had
arranged afterwards.
Nadia and Shahinaz: You're almost there, too, but you need to think about agreement;-)
The team members are really happy that they won the game, and now they are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.
or
The team is really happy with its victory, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.
or
The team is really happy that it won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they had thrown afterwards.
Milijana: You have solved part of the problem with those answers--well done; now can you check the verb tenses?
The team is really happy with its victory; the players are now recovering from the after-party.:)
Milijana: You found the problem, but "after-party" isn't right--it's not an English expression;-)
One more try:
The team is really happy with its victory; the players are now recovering from the party they threw afterward. :-)
Milijana: An excellent solution.
The team is really happy they won the game, and now all the players are recovering from the party they had to celebrate afterwards.
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