Monday, December 10, 2007

ALL CHANGE! Dec. 10th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

The fresh snow outside makes the neighbourhood look Christmassy.

1. change the subject noun 2. change direct object noun
3. change the first adjective 4. change the first verb name
5. change the second verb name 6. change the predicate adjective
7. change the verb tense.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

1. change the subject noun
The fresh snowflakes makes the neighborhood look Christmassy.

Anonymous said...

2. Change the direct object noun:

The fresh snowflakes outside makes the park look Christmassy.

Veronica Baig said...

Sara: Good--but what happened to "outside"?
Nadia: Very nice.

Anonymous said...

I missed "outside" as I was typing too fast.

Anonymous said...

3. change the first adjective

The glittering snowflakes outside make the park look Christmassy.

Veronica Baig said...

Milijana: A good change.

Anonymous said...

4. change the first verb name
The glittering snowflakes outside ensures the park look Christmassy.

Veronica Baig said...

Andra: Good verb change, but note the problem with subject-verb agreement;-)