Correct the errors in the following sentence:
There were to much peoples at the mall so I was hurried up shopping, I was too hurried that the shirt’s I bought's not big enough and I'm having to return them.
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There were too many people at the mall so I hurried up shopping, I was so hurried that the shirt I bought is not big enough and I have to return it.
There were too much people at the mall, so I was hurrying up to do the shopping.I was hurried that the shirt I bought is not big enough that I had to return it.
There were too many people at the mall and I had to shop in a hurry. I was so hurried that the shirts I bought were not big enough and now I'm having to return them.
UZMA: Good--apart from the punctuation;-)
JAYA: You're on the righ track here, but there is some word confusion, and one too many "that"s;-)
MAYA: Also good apart from the punctuation;-)
There were too many people at the mall so I hurried up shopping. I was so hurried that the shirt I bought was not big enough and I will have to return it.
MARTHA: Almost there--a comma is missing;-)
There were too many people at the mall, so I hurried up shopping. I was too much in a hurry that I bought shirts not big enough, and I will need to return them.
STEPHANIE: Getting there--a slight rewording of the last part of the sentence would help:-)
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