For entertaining Hai is liking to going too outdoors concerts in the Summer or during the Winter he is watching much reality television's shows.
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For entertainment, Hai likes going to outdoor concerts in the Summer, and during Winter he watches a lot of reality shows on television.
For entertainment, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer and during winter he watches a lot of reality shows on television.
For entertainment, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer or during winter he watches many reality television shows.
For entertainment, Hai is likely to go to outdoor concerts in the summer and during the winter, he watches many reality television shows.
MAYA:Almost--think capitalization;-)
JAYA:Almost--think punctuation;-)
UZMA: Almost--think punctuation;-)
MARTHA: Almost--think punctuation;-)
For entertainment: Hai is likely to go to outdoor concerts in the summer, and during the winter he watches many reality television shows.
For entertainment, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer, or during the winter, he watches many reality television shows.
MARTHA: Good try, but you should use a colon only after an independent clause;-)
STAPHANIE: A nice solution:-)
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