Friday, May 14, 2010

ALL CHANGE! May 14th, 2010

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make

A small deer lazily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees.
Changes:  1. subject noun   2. direct object noun                 3. indirect object noun                       4. adjective(s)      5. adverb(s)           6. verb name           7. verb tense

6 comments:

jaya said...

#1.A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees.

Julie said...

#2. Direct object noun

A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush garden around the tall trees.

Stephanie said...

# 3 Indirect object noun

A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush pasture around the tall trees.

Unknown said...

From: A small rabbit lazily nibbled the lush pasture around the tall trees.

#4, change in adjectives:

A giant rabbit lazily nibbled the scarce pasture around the tiny trees.

Saadat said...

#5. Adverb(s)

A giant rabbit carefully nibbled the scarce pasture near the tiny trees.

Veronica Baig said...

JAYA: yes!
JULIE:yes!
STEPHANIE:That's the direct object;-)
INGRID:nicely done:-)
SAADAT:yes!