Correct the errors in the following sentence:
For instant; the way in which the correspondents course differ then classrooms , is that the equipments' costs are very expensive for students are ought to have computer, internet, and another modern up to date things.
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For instance; the way in which the correspondence course differs from the classroom is that equipment costs are very expensive for students need to have a computer, internet, and other modern up to date things.
For instance, the way in which the correspondence course differs from the classroom, is that equipments' cost is very expensive for students who must have a computer, internet, and other modern up to date things.
For instance, the way in which correspondence courses differ from classroom courses is that the cost for equipment is very expensive for students, who ought to have a computer, internet access, and other modern up to date material.
For instance, the way in which corresponding courses differ from classrooms is: the cost of materials is very expensive for the students ought to have a computer, internet and modern up-to-date things.
MARTHA: You're on the right track here; now think about clarifying what is being referred to and punctuation;-)
WOOKJIN:You've also made some good improvement; you need to think about some clarification, noun form, and punctuation;-)
INGRID: You've also made some good changes. Clarify what the expensive equipment is needed for, and think about punctuation;-)
STEPHANIE:Again some good changes--think about word form and punctuation as well as clarification or general idea:-)
The way in which the correspondents
course differ than classrooms is that the equipments' costs are very high,for instant, computer,internet,and other up to date things.
Correspondence courses differ from the classrooms; for instance, the cost of materials is very expensive for students ought to have a computer, an access to internet and other modern, up-to-date things.
SAADAT:You have some word/word form confusion here that you need to sort out; you also need to think about how to form a comparison;-)
STEPHANIE: yes, but you're not comparing similar forms of things;-)
For instance, the way in which correspondence courses differ from classroom courses is that the cost for home-studying equipment is very expensive for students, who ought to have a computer, internet access and other modern up to date material.
For instant; the way in which the correspondence course differs from the classroom is because the equipments cost is very expensive for students to have a computer, internet and other modern things up to date.
The difference between a correspondence course and a traditional classroom is that the former requires more expensive equipment such as a computer,internet,and other modern and up to date necessities.
INGRID:That's great--there's just a little bit of punctuation left to fix;-)
JAYA: You have made some good improvements here. Now think about word form and number, word order and punctuation.
SAADAT:An excellent solution:-)
Sorry, I can't figure it out...
"up-to-date" like Stephanie's? Hum, wikipedia mentions that the hyphen is a punctuation mark... could be my mistake.
INGRID: Congratulations on figuring it out--now you won't ever forget that:-)
For instance; the way in which correspondence courses differ from classroom learning is that equipment costs are very expensive for students not in a classroom because they need to have a computer, internet, and other modern up to date things.
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