Friday, May 28, 2010

ALL CHANGE! May 28th, 2010

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make

The simple answer generally hides the deeper complexity of an issue.

Changes: 1. subject noun 2. direct object noun 3. indirect object noun 4. adjective(s) 5. adverb(s) 6. verb name 7. verb tense

9 comments:

Meghan said...

#1 Subject noun: answer
change to: outcome
"The simple outcome generally hides the complexity of an issue."

Veronica Baig said...

MEGHAN: Nice change:-)

Saadat said...

#2. direct object noun,

The simple outcome generally hides the complexity of an outflow.

Stephanie said...

# 2 direct object noun
The simple outcome generally hides the complicatedness of an outflow.

Veronica Baig said...

SAADAT: You changed the indirect object noun instead of the direct object noun;-)
STEPHANIE: You've tried to fix the problem, but you've used a word form that doesn't exist;-) The original word--complexity--usually covers this situation. It might be easier to think of an entirely different word.

Saadat said...

#2. Direct Object Noun
The simple outcome generally hides the deeper intricate of an issue.

#3. Indirect Object
The simple outcome generally hides the deeper intricate of an outflow.

Sorry, I just wanted to fix the problem.

Veronica Baig said...

SAADAT: Thank you!

Unknown said...

From: The simple outcome generally hides the deeper intricate of an outflow.

4. by changing adjectives

The final outcome generally hides the fine intricacy of an outflow.

Sorry in turn, I changed something else; my electronic dictionary mentions intricate as an adjective and intricacy as its noun...

Veronica Baig said...

INGRID: Nicely done:-)