Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
7 comments:
Many immigrant professionals would find hard to pursue their careers in Canada without The Immigrant Access Fund who provides loans for internationally trained immigrants, used to help paying the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
Many immigrant professionals would find hard to pursue their careers in Canada without the loans provided by The Immigrant Access Fund, which can be used to help them paying the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
JULIE: The second version is much better, but note some errors:
1. would find IT hard to do (something)
2. to help them PAY.
Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada; however, the Immigration Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants in order to help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
SAADAT: it's a proper noun, so you can't change "Immigrant Access Fund"; otherwise, the sentence is good.
The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans that help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgradingfor for the many internationally trained professional immigrants who find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
INGRID: A good answer:-)
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