Tuesday, July 6, 2010

ALL CHANGE! July 6th, 2010

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make

My wonderful parents lovingly raised their son’s children.

Changes: 1. subject noun 2. direct object noun 3. indirect object noun 4. adjective(s) 5. adverb(s) 6. verb name 7. verb tense

7 comments:

Shelley said...

His wonderful parents lovingly raised their son's children.

Veronica Baig said...

SHELLY: You've changed a pronoun here--not the subject nou. Please try again:-(

wookjin said...

My wonderful cousins lovingly raised their son's children.

Saadat said...

My wonderful cousins lovingly raised their son's grandchildren.

Veronica Baig said...

WOOKJIN:Good--you made change #1.
SAADAT: Yes, you made change #2:-)

ingrid said...

From

My wonderful cousins lovingly raised their son's grandchildren.

change #3: indirect object noun

I can't find one so I'm going to

change #4: adjective(s)

My generous cousins lovingly raised their son's grandchildren.

Veronica Baig said...

INGRID: The indirect object is "son";-) Change #4 is good.