Thursday, March 19, 2009

ALL CHANGE! Mar. 19, 2010

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

Mira happily gave friendly Omar a birthday gift.

Changes:                                
1. subject noun     2. direct object noun     3. indirect object noun         
4. adjective(s)      5. adverb(s)    6. verb name     7. verb tense

7 comments:

Stephanie said...

Sarah happily gave friendly Omar a birthday gift.

Julie said...

Sarah happily gave friendly Omar a birthday cake.

Saadat said...

5. Sarah excitedly gave friendly Omar a cake.
6. Sarah happily bought friendly Omar a birthday cake.
7. Sarah will give friendly Omar a birthday cake.

uzma said...

#1 Mona happily gave friendly Omar a birthday gift.
#2 Mona happily gave friendly Omar a birthday present.
#3 Mona happily gave friendly Nadia a birthday present.
#4 Mona happily gave friendly Nadia a christmas present.
#5 Mona gladly gave friendly Nadia a christmas present.
#6 Mona gladly showed friendly Nadia a christmas present.
#7 Mona will gladly show friendly Nadia a christmas present.

Tamara said...

Stephanie and Julie: Great!

Saadat: Good. But stick with one posting and let the next student carry on from your changes.

Uzma: The fourth one is incorrect (indirect object pronoun) but the rest are good. Just do one sentence next time and let the next student pick up where you leave off. Thanks!

jaya said...

Tania happily gave friendly Omar a birthday gift.

Veronica Baig said...

JAYA: Yes, but note that you should build on Uzma's last sentence;-)