Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.
Santa has already arrived at busy shopping centres.
1. change the subject noun
2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun
4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb
6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense
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Saint Nicholas has already arrived at busy shopping centres.
#2-Santa,The Great has already arrived at busy shopping centres.
#3Santa has already arrived at busy medical centres.
#4Santa has already arrived at husty shopping centres
Santa has already eaten at busy shopping centres
ABBY: Good!
UZMA: Change #2--you have just added to the subject. #3--you changed the adjective--not the noun; #4--there is no such word as "husty"; #5--you changed the verb instead of the adverb.
NEXT STUDENT: Please make change #6.
#4 Santa has already arrived at hastey shopping centres
#5 Santa has planned to arrive at busy shopping centres.
#4 Santa has already arrived at busy medical centres.
#6 Santa has already left busy shopping centres.
#7 Santa will be arriving at busy shopping centres.
#1 Saint Andrio has already arrived at busy shopping centres.
UZMA: #4--if you mean "hasty" that adjective doesn't work here; #5--you changed the adjective again and deleted the adverb;#4--why did you go back to this change? #6--good verb change; #7--you should have continued to use the verb that you used for #6; #1--okay. UZMA--you need to keep the changes made each time so that the changes are cumulative--don't go back to the original sentence and just change that part of speech;-)
#7 Santa will leave busy shopping centres.
#4Santa has already arrived at crowdy shopping centres.
UZMA: You have left some things out og #7; #4--the problem is that "crowdy" is not a word--the adjective is "crowded".
#2. Saint Nicholas has already arrived at busy malls.
ABBY: Another good change.
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