Monday, November 10, 2008

ALL CHANGE, Nov. 10th, 2009

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

Overworked staff are already decorating stores for Christmas.

1. change the subject noun 2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjective
5. change the adverb 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense

9 comments:

Abby Heiser said...

Overworked Walmart employees are already decorating stores for Christmas.

Veronica Baig said...

ABBY: Good change.

Amin said...

#2--Overworked Walmart staff are already decorating stores for Christmas.

Abby Heiser said...

#3 Overworked Walmart staff are already decorating windows for Chrismas.

Veronica Baig said...

AMIN: That's really part of the subject:-(
ABBY: That's really change #2--the direct object;-)
NEXT STUDENT: Please make change #3--the indirect object.

Abby Heiser said...

Overworked Walmart staff are already decorating windows for the holiday season.

Veronica Baig said...

ABBY: Another good change:-)

uzma said...

Overactive staff are already decorating stores for the Great Christmas.

Veronica Baig said...

UZMA: Good:-)